There was a boy going for a swimming cup. He was shocked and he was shaking because he thought he might lose this race. He was stretching and getting ready for the race. It was time for the race. He said to himself "Oh no!" The siren went and he dropped down into the water and the water splashed like it exploded. He was confident to win the race. Two minutes later he won the race. He was proud of himself and he had a wonderful time.
Great work Haele you found great work today.
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Keep it up haele
Well done for using the interesting verbs we found in our story in your own writing. Keep adding to your vocabulary! I am very proud that you made sure every sentence made sense Haele.
ReplyDeleteHello again Haele, just letting you know that I used this piece of writing tonight at university! We were learning about verbs so I used your story and showed them all the fantastic verbs you used.
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