My Beautiful Place

I know a better place that you could not imagine...

It is the Sky City. In the town there was this sparkling, shiny, silver building. I liked this building because it was tall like a rocket flying up the sky. After that I walked inside, I could see fireworks were exploding, popping like a vicious volcano up the blue sky.

When my ears opened I could hear Tui birds flapping their wings, people screaming as they jump off for sky diving. I could smell African lynx. Believe it or not, we could feel the excitement rushing through our veins. When I walk around the restaurant, I could smell the air conditioners.

I could taste the fresh air blessing me smoothly, coming to my mouth as I walked next door.
I hope you have a picture in your mind and I hope you get to visit my beautiful place.

What Makes A Good Speech?

First T3 Post

I’ve been on holiday and I am looking forward to our new topic we are doing.
I am looking forward to the rugby world cup 2011 because I like rugby and looking forward to take my netbook home.

Buddy Writing

Today we did some buddy Writing with room 7 .We helped them to re-craft their Writing samples.This is me and my buddy Koreniah.I hope we get to do this again,it was fun!

On t.v. 1news there is a really bad tsunami that had happen in Japan. It happen on March 13th 2011.

When you look at the Tsunami you can see parts of the buildings splashing in the water. And you can see enormous,and a big wave coming near you.

When people had completed climbing up the building they could hear cars crashing into each other.

The Tsunami was breaking lots of stuff including power lines,buildings and cars .

I know what people think when they can see the Tsunami I can damage our love ones.Also the Tsunami horrible.

When the Tsunami crashing the people was panicing.After that they yelled out to there friends and family ‘s to get out and we told them to go climb up the tall building where every one is.

As we were safe up the tall building we were just looking at the Tsunami until it was finished.

Tsunami Description

Tsunami Description
Hello I’m live in Japan. At 3am it was starting to shake. When I walked outside I saw a huge thing outside. The huge, enormous thing was coming closer. As soon it was very close I knew it was a tsunami, so I was telling everyone to wake up.

When I was viewing I could see smashing waves,people climbing big towers and I could even see people’s hearts were broken.

It started to get worse and worse. There was furious water charging into this small city. As I was looking the tsunami was catastrophic.

I could hear screaming, houses crunching, cracking and also splitting. I could hear cries for loved ones and even electric lines snapping.

There were people speaking to each other. The tsunami was damaging houses. After that it started to go brown and the tsunami made lots of smoke.

I felt the fear of the screams, felt water climbing up to my shoes. My mum was working today and her building collapsed and I was nervous. It has been a horrible thing to happen.

By Haele

My goal for term 2

Term Two Learning Goals
My learning goal for reading this term is:
To read a chapter every night and to find powerful words in my reading that I can use in my writing.
To achieve this goal, I will need to:
Read a chapter every night and never say never.
My whanau can help me achieve this by:
Checking if I have learnt something, check if I have found lots of interesting
facts and words after I read each chapter.

My learning goal for Writing this term is:
Is to keep writing different stories every night and check if it makes sense.
To achieve this goal, I will need to:
Look at the dictionary to find more powerful words and to check if it is in order and to check that every sentence makes sense.
My whanau can help me achieve this by:
To check my work and help me make the right changes for it to make sense.

My learning goal for maths this term is:
To keep on trying to count up to the biggest number,and count in my head
To achieve this goal, I will need to:
Is to keep my head on maths
My whanau can help me by:
telling me another thing about maths

My personal goal for this term is:
To be an All Black.
To achieve this goal,I will need to:
Keep on playing all sports, training hard and playing my best in every game.
My whanau can help me by:
Taking me to visit the All Blacks.